The night rang with the cacophonous pitch of rides and the thrilling screams and laughter of riders. Some type of heavy metal played over the loudspeaker, too loud for me to tell who it was. Knowing Luc, it was probably something creepy and mood setting, a-la Black Sabbath.
I watched the scene with cold detachment, not paying much attention to the women or children. I wasn’t into that sorta thing. I preferred my prey young, muscular, and full of testosterone.
Don't forget to tell the Dad in your life Happy Father's Day! Have a great one! :)
4 comments:
Whew...that last line tells the tale! Can't wait to see what happens next...great job!
Oh...sinister! Excellent job setting up the scene, Linda :-) ! The dark music, the emotional detachment from an otherwise happy scene...and looking for her prey. Nice!
Thanks all! :D That is the first book of my Death series. Wrote book 1 4 years ago, am just now plotting book 2... LOL. How's that for procrastination! :p
lol...nah, Linda. I don't see it as procrastination. It just had to age a bit--like a good wine. :-) I understand! :-)
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