tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post4875596305144854480..comments2023-09-19T06:35:17.700-07:00Comments on Marie Hall: Weekend Writing Warriors: Post #1Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-87800094472860518872013-02-05T21:14:02.055-08:002013-02-05T21:14:02.055-08:00Amazing hook!Amazing hook!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-64990325830187177112013-02-04T14:19:02.944-08:002013-02-04T14:19:02.944-08:00That's a powerful beginning! I love it!That's a powerful beginning! I love it!Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-62311315287575173332013-02-03T22:32:44.798-08:002013-02-03T22:32:44.798-08:00Great place to leave off; I'm wondering what e...Great place to leave off; I'm wondering what exactly happened that caused him to understand her words.E.D. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06919218250424892502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-83998006969359446622013-02-03T12:53:24.794-08:002013-02-03T12:53:24.794-08:00I liked the "voice" of the character and...I liked the "voice" of the character and the poignancy that Flint never gets to tell his mother he understands now. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-37749820068283415582013-02-03T12:33:30.915-08:002013-02-03T12:33:30.915-08:00Chaos Theory. At least that's where it comes f...Chaos Theory. At least that's where it comes from.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-83004179882200305592013-02-03T08:54:50.781-08:002013-02-03T08:54:50.781-08:00Wow, great journal entry to snag the readers, Mari...Wow, great journal entry to snag the readers, Marie. I'm not a YA fan, but that grabbed me immediately. Nicely done. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-43177280612653289002013-02-03T07:20:04.685-08:002013-02-03T07:20:04.685-08:00As the others have said; interested to know how F...As the others have said; interested to know how Flint came to understand her mother's words. Great hook!Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-80277629154218485372013-02-03T07:12:45.797-08:002013-02-03T07:12:45.797-08:00Wonderful!Wonderful!Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-19638680275384799812013-02-03T06:57:24.481-08:002013-02-03T06:57:24.481-08:00Yes ~ snappy writing. Good hook. Great eight!Yes ~ snappy writing. Good hook. Great eight!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-252014336498512292013-02-03T06:13:08.061-08:002013-02-03T06:13:08.061-08:00Very emotional snippet. I like how you take a sayi...Very emotional snippet. I like how you take a saying we've all heard and make it the heart of such a sad diary entry. It's also a great hook - what has happened to make Flint finally understand?ClareMDavidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14991198230954154810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-43911892062109732572013-02-03T03:30:38.459-08:002013-02-03T03:30:38.459-08:00Loved it! Loved it! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-23766923609008391472013-02-03T03:08:28.643-08:002013-02-03T03:08:28.643-08:00Echoing Teresa here, there is nothing in those sen...Echoing Teresa here, there is nothing in those sentences not to like. And I, too, want to know what seemingly insignificant thing it was that Flint did to make him finally understand the truth of those words.Kizzia https://www.blogger.com/profile/13033284940593354024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-28822021574672332652013-02-02T23:00:15.060-08:002013-02-02T23:00:15.060-08:00Oops, my bad. Totally forgot! Fixed it. And thanks...Oops, my bad. Totally forgot! Fixed it. And thanks! :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-27077248095702512342013-02-02T21:53:43.798-08:002013-02-02T21:53:43.798-08:00That is an awesome snippet, Marie! It leaves me w...That is an awesome snippet, Marie! It leaves me wanting to read more. " I finally understand" Oh, the questions those three words pose! Excellent eight. ;-)<br /><br />Any chance that next week, you can link back to wewriwa.com? :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com