tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post1473679555023618901..comments2023-09-19T06:35:17.700-07:00Comments on Marie Hall: A Moment Part 2Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-3650662197024813742013-03-01T23:30:05.551-08:002013-03-01T23:30:05.551-08:00Ummm... yes, sheesh, I thought scoliosis sounded w...Ummm... yes, sheesh, I thought scoliosis sounded wrong. And after countless rounds of edits too!<br /><br />And I'm glad you like it. :D It was a real labor of love.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933466509156479480.post-66283207836092747202013-03-01T22:51:37.285-08:002013-03-01T22:51:37.285-08:00Marie, this is AWESOME! I am hooked. :-) ! What ...Marie, this is AWESOME! I am hooked. :-) ! What a great job of drawing in the reader. That last sentence in her part packs such a devastating punch!<br /><br />One thing? In this sentence in Liliana's part, "Doctors say she’s in the beginning stages of multiple scoliosis, which means dad had to come." --- Is "multiple sclerosis" a better choice?<br /><br />I can hardly wait to read this one! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com